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The common trickster will declare
the phoenix is a bird of flame. Not so.
How can mere flame survive death?
The phoenix I tell you is imagination's
gift: you cannot conjure what you cannot
dream. To the crossroads take rubies
finely ground. Where earth's secret
vapours rise, toss a pinch of this dust.
If your spirit lacks the necessary fire,
some other bird may heed your call.
inspired by Dr Fulminare's website: www.drfulminare.com
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Swep-Lovitt Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
2nd line cut "is" and "not so." cut "I tell you" in line 4. next-to-last line "Beware:" to start the line and continue the tone, though that wrecks your line length.
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SmartMaxwell Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
This is fantastic!
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venturus Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012   Writer
glad you liked it Smart. :)
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